A Heavy Rain (1st ever haiku)

Immense summer sky 
A heavy rain is falling 
Love becomes chaos

©Alexander Berg Mattsson, 2012


18 thoughts on “A Heavy Rain (1st ever haiku)

  1. lscotthoughts says:

    Great job, Alex! Keep them coming! I never knew how to write them until reading others last year and now I love the challenge (not that I’m any good, but I enjoy them)! 🙂

    1. thepoeticgoblin says:

      Thank you, Lauren! I haven’t really “studied” the art of haiku either, but I’ve read some on here so I decided to go for it. It’s definitely harder than it looks, and really challenging.

  2. bipolarmuse says:

    Congrats!!! I was scared to do my first but it is a wonderful style.
    I think you captured this form very well Alex… you said so much in few words. Absolutely love it. ♥

  3. Hamid R. says:

    I have to say you are a really talented poet, I loved your blog, its style and the way you organized it. I admire these all.
    and by the way thanks for stopping by my blog.
    have a good time,

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