I’m 26 and I use a pen to try and make sense out of the world.
I suffer the fate of constant misconception
Forcefully following the path of loud discretion
Silently resilient as the four walls suffocate me
My words written in the blood of innocence
They sing the melody of my wistfulness
My heart and mind are in a state of dissonance
As I buckle beneath the cross of my own fickleness – Β “An Erratic Mind”
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Hello there!
Thanks so much for visiting my blog and “liking” several of my poems! Your blog sounds very interesting and I look forward to reading about your different topics, but, hopefully, you aren’t too troubled! π I do like the quote at the top about the world needing to adjust! Thanks again!
No problem! Haha, no I hope I’m not too troubled I hope, and I really enjoyed your poetry. Especially “Betrayal”. Yeah, the quote is especially brilliant, but I can’t claim to be its creator. Joe Budden (A hip-hop artist) said it in a song. I just feel like it fit me π
Sorry for the late reply! Thanks for your comment on “Betrayal” and your kind complement! At least you were honest about the quote! π
& thanks for the kind words!
You’re welcome! π
Hello PoeticGoblin!
I’ve nominated you for the Versatile Blogger Award. Please visit my blog when you can: http://lscotthoughts.com/2011/12/01/versatile-blogger-award-3/
Lauren π
Thanks!!! π
Hey TPG,
I’ve added you to my blog roll; just letting you know, so hopefully, you’ll receive even more traffic! L π
p.s. do you prefer TPG or Alexander on your blog?? π
Thank LScott! I really appreciate it π
I prefer TPG (for now, haha)
inspired name. thanks for visiting my blog & the like! my favorites are your fictional pieces – they have a distinct voice with both impact & possibilities π love it.
take care ~
kate
Thank you & I’ll be visiting yours again! I really like that you enjoy my fictional writing, that’s what really matters in the end! π
What’s up? How’s my favorite Poetic Goblin doing? I wanted to stop by and let you know that I nominate you for another award, the Versatile Blogger Award. If anyone deserves it, it’s you. I always enjoy coming here and reading your work.
Thank you! I really don’t feel like I deserve all your praise & accolades but I always blush when people read my work & I too enjoy your site. It means a lot to me for you to drop by and comment! Thanks
just checking thru the blogs and totally enjoyed your style! 1
Appreciate it!
Hey, PG, I know I’ve done this before (I’ve repeated others, too, so bear with me), but Iβve nominated you for the Versatile Blogger Award, so please visit me for more info:
http://lscotthoughts.com/2012/01/08/versatile-blogger-award-a-humble-curtsy/
Lauren (enjoy, again!)
Haha, it’s okay! It’s an honor non the less to be nominated by you Lauren!
I nominated you for the Liebster Blog Award π
Check it out here: http://bipolarmuse.com/2012/01/16/liebster-blog-award/
Congrats!
Thank you!
Hi PG,
Iβve nominated you for the ONE LOVELY BLOG AWARD, so please visit me for more info:
http://lscotthoughts.com/2012/01/17/one-lovely-blog-award
Lauren π
I have just been reading some of the previous entries that have been written here but I have not brought you an Award my friend, however I will certainly venture into your world of blogging and read some of your poetry…
I hope that you are having a pleasant start to your week and that you are enjoying the many delights of our community in WordPress…
Androgoth
Haha, that’s okay! People are even taking their time to read my words, what more could one ask for? I look forward to reading yours as well.
I have nominated you for the Versatile Blogger Award. Details at gjscobie.wordpress.com π
I really enjoy your writings and poems a lot, so I nominated you to receive βThe Versatile Blogger Awardβ
Click this link to know all about the award:
http://parryelwahey.wordpress.com/2012/01/22/the-versatile-blogger-award
Thank you! I will be clicking into your site shortly
I just nominated you for the ABC award .. If you wish to accept it youβll find the details here: http://parryelwahey.wordpress.com/2012/02/10/the-abc-award/
Have a great day TPG π
Thank you! π
I have nominated you for the Liebster Blogging Award if you should wish to accept it. Details are are at https://gjscobie.wordpress.com/2012/02/18/liebster-blog-award/
Appreciate it! π
I like your subtitle: …Perhaps the world does need to adjust itself. Keep on being you!
Thank you, and don’t worry, I will!
Hi Alex,
I have nominated you for the Hope Unites Globally (HUG) Award. Please visit my blog for more information: http://lscotthoughts.com/2012/03/15/hope-unites-globally-hug-award-2nd-nomination-2.
Lauren π
Thank you Lauren! I’ll make sure to check it out later π
Hello there,
You write wonderful poetry up here. Well done! π Keep penning and keep inspiring! I am sure one day the door will open for you and that lost of readers will find your poetry both entertaining and interesting! π
Have a lovely day my friend! π
Subhan Zein
Thank you for all of your kind comments! I really appreciate it and wish you all the best in the future as well
Many thanks for liking my recent post. I love your tag line, βmaybe Iβm normal and the world just needs to adjust.β Your honesty is refreshing and I am awed by your ability to capture a moment, a thought.
Thank you for the heartwarming praise and I hope to see more of you here! Just as I plan to read more of your work π
I love “21-year old man in my ADOLESCENCE” –at least you’re honest about it!
I love the byline of your blog: yes, the world does need to adjust. To all us poets.
-D
Haha, I might be 21 on paper.. But I consider myself very much a young adult still! I’m in school until I’m 25 so I hide behind that as an excuse, haha π
Hi ThePoeticGoblin,
I hope the sun is shining brightly in your heart and the sea is always blue in the part of your horizon.
Iβm dropping by to thank you for following my blog. I hope I donβt disappoint you and that your visits in my blog have been and will always be a joyful ride! π
Thank you again and have a lovely day, my friend! π
Subhan Zein
Thank you very much for your heartwarming comment. I am glad to have found your blog! I wish you a good day as well
Thank you! π
Subhan Zein
Congrats!!!
I have nominated you for 3 awards..
Have a look when you have a moment.
link below:
http://jhasmoments.wordpress.com/2012/06/06/more-nominations-abc-award-and-more-posting-all/
Thank you very much! π
You’re welcome π
It’s good you admit to being “troubled”. I’m troubled too. To not be troubled in this day and age is a usually a sure sign that somebody has some serious blinders keeping them from seeing the state of things out there. Stay troubled. (That is a compliment.) But do take it easy and enjoy as well!
We are all troubled in some way, but it is indeed a sign of being in touch with oneself to admit it. You are correct.. One must not forget to enjoy stuff as well!
Hey! I appreciate you taking the time to read my blog! Your poetry is beautiful and I will be a visitor often! I used to be a slam poet back in Canada, competing for a few years before life took me somewhere else. Do you share your poetry at poetry readings, competitions etc? I think a lot of people would benefit to hear your words.
Take care!
Don’t mention it! I’m glad you feel like that about my words, and I will take your idea in consideration. It would be a great experience to share my words in person, and I’m grateful for your positive feedback.
Likewise!
Knowing about you was great your stuff is beautiful, consider yourself talented caise you are!
You’re far too kind!
I’m going to follow you now. π
I have noticed you haven’t personalised your blog yet. Please tell me if there’s anything I could do like designing a logo or something. I think it could enhance the great work you already do.
Thank you for the offer! I’ll seriously consider it since I’ve plans to run a personal blog/website.
Oh I’m glad! π
I saw myself in every corner of this blog.
Thank you for being there!
x
No, thank you for coming here!
Alex i would just say you are original and real! Artistic genius has to blossom over years to be appreciated, and still some are not until they pass! Erratic, no, just growing strong mentally, as you face maddening pace in your life. Right now some do understand you, others might come later…but you will always find that group of other creative geniuses who understand you, Believe it or not when i was your age, people thought i was on the strange side because my spirit had not really settled down! It all will come but always enjoy your life to the fullest…live and learn! You are appreciated my friend!
Thank you, those are big and honoring words, and I’m glad you feel that way. Hopefully, one day, I’ll be able to feel like “one” with my generation, something that seem far fetched today.
Thanks again.
Hugs for you Alex. xXx