Anxiously waiting
To find out if I fear love
A shaded sunrise
©Alexander Berg Mattsson, 2012
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Anxiously waiting
To find out if I fear love
A shaded sunrise
©Alexander Berg Mattsson, 2012
thepoeticgoblin 
This is mysterious and thought provoking, Alex! I really like it and am glad you’re trying more haiku! 🙂
That’s what I wanted it to be, so glad it worked! Of course,it’s really challenging. But also very rewarding.
pretty cool !! that end line sells it as i see it because of it’s dual image.
Once again, you see right through the literary devices!
Very good!! You are becoming quite good with the Haikus… I love watching your writing style grow. ♥
Reblogged this on Str!ngin Along….
So cool Alex, such a profound statement with true ringing all over.
Thank you! I appreciate it 🙂